Kia Ora! I'm a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School. I really enjoyed your blog post. I think your really good at this, (talking and explaining what myths and legends .
Did you like doing this? Did you find it fun? What do you think you could improve yourself?
Hi Emil! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! I love your story because it makes sense and I like the names that you have used for this.
I felt like I was going to cry! It was very emotional, especially the part where it said 'so when you see the northern lights it's her ashes' such a love story!
Next time I would love for you to add in more descriptive language into your writing to paint a picture in my head. Where did you get the idea from? or is it completely made up?
Hi Emil, I like how clearly you explained the meaning of myth and legand. Your story sounds REALLY GOOD. It actually sounds like a myth that people would come up with.
The blog is great but to make it better you could add colour or pictures to your slide. For example, you could draw a picture of your story Ko nga Maama. Out of all the myths and legands you heard, what's your favourite? My favourite is the myth of dragons. Don't think it would be that good if they were real :l. I hope to see your reply. BYYEEE! By Mika Link to blog:http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteI'm a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really enjoyed your blog post.
I think your really good at this, (talking and explaining what myths and legends .
Did you like doing this?
Did you find it fun?
What do you think you could improve yourself?
Kind Regards
Grace,
Hi Emil! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! I love your story because it makes sense and I like the names that you have used for this.
ReplyDeleteI felt like I was going to cry! It was very emotional, especially the part where it said 'so when you see the northern lights it's her ashes' such a love story!
Next time I would love for you to add in more descriptive language into your writing to paint a picture in my head. Where did you get the idea from? or is it completely made up?
Great work!
Mia
Hi Emil,
ReplyDeleteI like how clearly you explained the meaning of myth and legand. Your story sounds REALLY GOOD. It actually sounds like a myth that people would come up with.
The blog is great but to make it better you could add colour or pictures to your slide. For example, you could draw a picture of your story Ko nga Maama. Out of all the myths and legands you heard, what's your favourite? My favourite is the myth of dragons. Don't think it would be that good if they were real :l. I hope to see your reply. BYYEEE!
By Mika
Link to blog:http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/