For writing this week we had to write a poem based around Autumn. We weren't to mention Autumn in the actual poem (apart from the title). I hope you enjoy it :)
Autumn
Leaves
Flaming, sunset orange and lying on the ground like a
blanket, covering the Earth.
blanket, covering the Earth.
Wind
Sweeping, swift and shaking the trees as if
wanting something from them.
wanting something from them.
Sky
Bright, cornflower blue and covered in puffy, pale
white clouds.
white clouds.
Trees
Rustic, brown and groaning quietly under the wind.
Birds
Chirping, flying and joyfully playing amongst the
branches.
branches.
Emil
I LOVE this poem Emil! What beautiful descriptive language, it makes me want to go and play outside in the leaves all rugged up in a warm wolley jersey.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is amazing, and I liked how you used a lot of descriptive language, AWESOME
ReplyDeleteKa pai
stay safe
Morning Emil
ReplyDeleteAmazing descriptive language within this poem. Well done.
Autumn is one of my favourite seasons because of the colourful leaves that can be seen. Especially good for piling up and burying your kids for a photo.
Tineka