Kia ora Emil. Its Morgan here from Totara 2. I find that it's a really good poem and it looks really good too. I think that ANZAC is a really sad time and it's good to remember The soldiers sent to Gallipoli. E noho ra (bye).
My name is Jedi and I am a year eight student in rimu class. I really love this poem because of all those interesting words you used. My favourite is Screeching. Because you didn't use something simple like: Screaming or shouting. And everything just flows really well.
I also loved the really creative layout, it really caught my eye. And this post brought me back to when here in rimu, we did some work on Anzac day.
Kia ora Emil. Its Morgan here from Totara 2. I find that it's a really good poem and it looks really good too. I think that ANZAC is a really sad time and it's good to remember The soldiers sent to Gallipoli. E noho ra (bye).
ReplyDeleteKia ora Emil ;D,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jedi and I am a year eight student in rimu class. I really love this poem because of all those interesting words you used. My favourite is Screeching. Because you didn't use something simple like: Screaming or shouting. And everything just flows really well.
I also loved the really creative layout, it really caught my eye. And this post brought me back to when here in rimu, we did some work on Anzac day.
Did you make this all by yourself?
Keep up the great work Emil!
Jedi≧◡≦