Hello my name is Bianca and i am from glenbrae school. I really like the fiction and how you ryhmed some of the the words. Adding more text would have made your limerick sound a bit better. but keep up the good work
How are you doing during the Level 4 lockdown? Hope there are some fun things happening at your house! This is a really good piece of poetry writing, great humour!
Don't forget to go and check out the Totara site for some of the fun things that you can do at this time! I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks and even looking at the photos of some of the things that you create or outside things you might do!
That Genie needs to pay his tuition!
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Bianca and i am from glenbrae school. I really like the fiction and how you ryhmed some of the the words. Adding more text would have made your limerick sound a bit better. but keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHello My name is Kalolaine I am from Glenbrae school .
ReplyDeleteI would like to say Well done and Keep on Blogging
Hi Emil
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing during the Level 4 lockdown? Hope there are some fun things happening at your house!
This is a really good piece of poetry writing, great humour!
Don't forget to go and check out the Totara site for some of the fun things that you can do at this time!
I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks and even looking at the photos of some of the things that you create or outside things you might do!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Hi your poem was great it was fun to read good work
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